CHAPTER ONE CORRECTIONS

Text 4 MAC72

Here in this army there are many heroic bowmen equal in fighting to Bhima and Arjuna; there are also great fighters like Yuyudhana, Virata and Drupada.

Text 4 MAC72 ✔

Here in this army there are many heroic bowmen equal in fighting to Bhima and Arjuna; there are also great fighters like Yuyudhana, Virata, and Drupada.

(Added Comma)

Text 5 MAC72

There are also great, heroic, powerful fighters like Dhrstaketu, Cekitana, Kasiraja, Purujit, Kuntibhoja and Saibya.

Text 5 MAC72 ✔

There are also great, heroic, powerful fighters like Dhrstaketu, Cekitana, Kasiraja, Purujit, Kuntibhoja, and Saibya.

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Text 6 MAC72

There are the mighty Yudhamanyu, the very powerful Uttamauja, the son of Subhadra and the sons of Draupadi. All these warriors are great chariot fighters.

Text 6 MAC72 ✔

There are the mighty Yudhamanyu, the very powerful Uttamauja, the son of Subhadra, and the sons of Draupadi. All these warriors are great chariot fighters. (Added Comma)

Text 8 MAC72

There are personalities like yourself, Bhisma, Karna, Krpa, Asvatthama, Vikarna and the son of Somadatta called Bhurisrava, who are always victorious in battle.

Text 8 MAC72 ✔

There are personalities like yourself, Bhisma, Karna, Krpa, Asvatthama, Vikarna, and the son of Somadatta called Bhurisrava, who are always victorious in battle.

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Text 9 MAC72

There are many other heroes who are prepared to lay down their lives for my sake. All of them are well equipped with different kinds of weapons, and all are experienced in military science.

Text 9 MAC72 ✔

There are many other heroes who are prepared to lay down their lives for my sake. All of them are well-equipped with different kinds of weapons, and all are experienced in military science.

(Hyphened “well-equipped”)

Text 13 MAC72

After that, the conchshells, bugles, trumpets, drums and horns were all suddenly sounded, and the combined sound was tumultuous.

Text 32-35 MAC72

O Govinda, of what avail to us are kingdoms, happiness or even life itself when all those for whom we may desire them are now arrayed in this battlefield? O Madhusudana, when teachers, fathers, sons, grandfathers, maternal uncles, fathers-in-law, grandsons, brothers-in-law and all relatives are ready to give up their lives and properties and are standing before me, then why should I wish to kill them, though I may survive? O maintainer of all creatures, I am not prepared to fight with them even in exchange for the three worlds, let alone this earth.

Text 13 MAC72 ✔

After that, the conchshells, bugles, trumpets, drums, and horns were all suddenly sounded, and the combined sound was tumultuous.

(Added Comma)

Text 32-35 MAC72 ✔

O Govinda, of what avail to us are kingdoms, happiness, or even life itself when all those for whom we may desire them are now arrayed in this battlefield? O Madhusudana, when teachers, fathers, sons, grandfathers, maternal uncles, fathers-in-law, grandsons, brothers-in-law, and all relatives are ready to give up their lives and properties and are standing before me, then why should I wish to kill them, though I may survive? O maintainer of all creatures, I am not prepared to fight with them even in exchange for the three worlds, let alone this earth.

(Added Commas)